Wednesday, December 12, 2012

Writing Practice: Innovating from a Piece of Literature



Sometimes it's fun to have kids create their own stories using characters from a piece of literature while adding a few of their own.  It's a great way to extend the fun from a beloved story, gain writing practice, and get creative.  Below is a play script I created with two young students (ages 7 and 9), in which we innovated from Midsummer Night's Dream...imagining Oberon, Titania and Puck on a camping trip!



Puck and Friends Fairy Adventure:
A Midsummer Night’s Dream Innovation

by Ivy Sandz with Josiah and Malcolm Knight

Characters
Narrator
Puck (a fairy)
Oberon (king of the fairies)
Titania (queen of the fairies)
Ubee (bug collector)
Harriet (butterfly collector)
Mitt (Puck’s brother)
Ubee’s dad
Ubee’s brother, Martin


Act I:  The Fairies Go Camping

Titania:             Oberon, we’re cooped up in this flower petal palace.  I have an idea!  Let’s go camping.

Oberon:            Puck, you’re coming too.  Prepare.  I might need you to gather wood, marshmallows, chocolate, and Hershey’s….or possibly a love potion flower. 

Puck:                (loudly) Yes, sir!

Narrator:          And the fairies set off for their camping adventure. 

Narrator Song: Well it’s a sunny day!
                        I feel brand new. 
                        There’s about a million things that fairies can do.
                        Wooah!
                        Would you like to go camping too?
                       
Narrator:          Meanwhile…Mitt, Puck’s brother, wanders through the woods where they are going camping.  As he flies through the meadow he notices two humans with nets.  He hides behind a large rock and listens.

Ubee:               It’s a nice day today, don’t you think, Harriet?

Harriet:             Why yes, Ubee.  A perfect day to catch butterflies.

Ubee:               Or insects!

Harriet:             I prefer butterflies.  Can you help me catch that pink one over there?

Narrator:          The two small entomologists take their nets, and go about collecting winged creatures. 

Mitt:                 Hmmm…this gives me an idea.  I will play a trick.  Puck will never know what happened to him until it’s too late.


Act II:  At the campsite

Oberon:            Titania, this is boring.

Titania:             Why don’t you eat something?

Oberon:            (loudly)  Puck, roast me some marshmallows and make some smores.  

Puck:                (rolling eyes) Okey dokey.

Narrator:          So Puck goes flying to the meadow to collect some kindling and sticks for the fire. 

Mitt:                 Hi Puck.  I had no idea you were here.

Puck:                Why yes, my little brother, I am here serving King Oberon.  I am gathering wood for the fire.

Mitt:                 Let me help you.  I saw the perfect twigs over that hill. 

Narrator:          While the two fairies flew over the hill, Oberon was wondering what was taking so long. 

Mitt:                 Oh Puck. I’m feeling a bit tired.  I must have eaten too many wild nettles.  You fly ahead and I’ll catch up. 

Harriet:             Look at that strange butterfly.  The wings are like a rainbow.  What is that?  It looks like a very small person! 

Ubee:               Let’s catch it and put it in a bottle.  That way we can identify it.  Maybe it’s never been discovered before and we can put it in a museum.

Narrator:          Puck, looking for twigs, didn’t notice before it was too late.  A large net came down around the unsuspecting fairy.  Before he knew it, Puck found himself inside a jar.  If you did not know this, there is a song about fairies and butterfly nets. 

Narrator Song: If you’re a little fairy and you think monsters are scary
                        You should not be scared of those things.
                        But a butterfly net
                        You better bet
                        Will take your power away. 

Act III:  Puck in a Pickle Jar

Ubee:               Wow!  It’s a weird bug. 

Harriet:             No, it’s a butterfly!

Ubee:               Are you sure, Harriet.  Look at it.  It looks like a person with dragonfly wings.

Harriet:             Maybe it’s a leprechaun.

Ubee:               Leprechauns have green hats and green suits, and he isn’t carrying a pot of gold with him.

Puck:                (voice muffled inside jar)  I demand..zzz…by the power of King Oberon…zzz…that you release me this instant!

Harriet:             What is it saying? It sounds like a bee.

Ubee:               I don’t know, but it sure looks mad.

Mitt:                 Hee-hee.  Hee-hee.  (Mitt flies away into the forest.)

Act IV:             Puck Finds a Friend

Narrator:          The two children took the pickle jar with the fairy in it to their house.

Puck’s song:     I should never have come along
                        Maybe I should quit my job.
                        That little rascal,
                        My brother, Mitt
                        I’m going to feed him to a dragonfly!
                        And then, I really am, going to quit my fairy job.
                        I’d like to become a gardener.  A very small one at that.

Ubee:               Dad, come here.  We found a cool watch-ma-call-it. 

Dad:                 (from other room).  That’s nice.  I’m working.  Go play in your room.

Harriet:             I still think it’s a leprechaun.

Martin:             Oooo!  What’s that.

Ubee:               Our insect. 

Harriet:             Yes.  We’re entomologist and we’ve made a discovery.

Puck:                What!  The nerve!  I’m not an insect.  I’m an all-powerful fairy, right-hand fairy of King Oberon himself.

Ubee:               He’s buzzing again. 

Martin:             Can I hold it?

Ubee:               No, we’re going to sell it.

Martin:             To who?

Harriet:             To Mr. Pricely.  He loves to dissect insects, and he gives us a whole dollar.

Martin:             Wow.  That’s a lot of money.


Act V:  Titania Smells a Rat

Titania:             I love camping.  It’s so peaceful out here in nature.

Oberon:            You’re just saying that because Puck isn’t here to play tricks on you while you do your yoga.  Where is he anyway?  I’m hungry.  He probably took a quick spin around the world.

Narrator:          Mitt, looking backward over his shoulder, flies right into the campsite of Oberon and Titania, knocking Titania out of her yoga pose.

Titania:             What in the world?  Mitt!  What are you doing here?

Oberon:            Have you seen Puck?

Mitt:                 Uh.  Uh.  Uh.  Hmmm.  Uh.  What do you mean?

Titania:             (whisper to Oberon).  I smell a rat.   (to Mitt)  Come here.

Narrator:          Titania put Mitt under a spell of artichokes and orange blossom, a powerful truth potion.

Titania:             Have you seen Puck?

Mitt:                 (fast, eyes wide open with fear)  Yes I have.  I played a trick on him.  I can’t stand him.  He’s always, “I am the right-hand man of Oberon, blah, blah, blah.”  Anyway, that’s all done now.  He is in a bottle where he belongs.  I’m sure by tonight he will be dissected. 

Mitt’s Song:      Well it’s a bad day
                        I had to confess my crime
                        There’s gonna be trouble now
                       
Oberon:            Quiet!  Stop your crooning. 

Titania:             Tie him up, Sunflower.

Sunflower:        Yes my lady.

Narrator:          So Oberon and Titania fly off to rescue Puck. 


Act VI:  Puck’s Rescue

Narrator:          Ubee’s brother Martin, stole the jar with Puck in it.  He is planning to dissect Puck himself. 

Puck:                How dare you little child!  I’ll show you!

Martin:             This will be the best specimen in my collection.

Dad:                 Martin, time for dinner.

Martin:             Oh, crackers!   (Martin leaves the jar next to his open window, and goes downstairs).

Narrator:          Titania and Oberon fly into the open window.

Titania:             My goodness. I’ve never seen Puck so helpless.

Oberon:            Well, my little friend.  What have you gotten yourself into?

Puck:                Get me out of here!

Narrator:          So, Titania and Oberon push the jar off the edge of the window sill, letting it crash into a million pieces on the ground.  The three fairies fly off into the sunset together.

Oberon:            Are we forgetting something?

Puck:                No, we’re not missing anything.  Everything is right where it belongs.

Narrator:          Back at the campsite, Mitt is tied to a sunflower.

Mitt:                 Help!  Help! Help!

The End


Try writing an innovative script with your child.  And if you want to take it a step further,
consider getting the neighborhood kids together for a performance!












Wednesday, June 27, 2012

Eavesdropping on Ten Year Olds

One of the joys of my work is that I get to listen to kids.  As a reading and writing teacher, usually what I'm listening for and observing is how a child is processing print, whether it's reading, writing or spelling.  I listen to see if a child is tentative or confident, enthusiastic or stressed out.  I also listen carefully for how a child is thinking so I can teach to each particular student.

Shakespeare Strikes the Children--costumes and swords a must~

Lucky for me, the way kids think and what they say can be extremely entertaining.  They don't see things through adult eyes. The world is fresh...they often say exactly what's on their minds.  And kids are naturally creative and smart...Here are a few of my favorite kid comments:


Advice from Ten Year Old Students

#1     Writing:

    “If you want to know a bit about my story,
watch my face as I write.  I change expressions as I act out the characters in my mind.”

#2     Scientific Experiment:

“I tried to fly once.  It was a really bad experience.”

#3     Historical Fact:
   
“Whoever invented hot chocolate is a genius.

#4     Metacognition:

“I don’t know what kettle of non-sense I’m in now.”

#5     Creativity:

“Don’t just wait at the bus stop for the Muse to pick you up."

See what I mean?  I don't give grades, but, seriously, if I did, they'd all get an A+.